Tell me of a love so deep
He ran the rivers dry
Waiting just to see him
He over spent his time
Not knowing just how
Out of reach he really was
Tell me of the whispered word
Slow passing down the line
Of how without intention
He keeps him bottled
While he waited to see
But never knew his faults
Tell me how he heard
The news of what he did
Such pain
Amongst the longing
Not sure how he could cope
So now
Tell me the story
About how the Sun
Loved the Moon so much
He died every night
To let him breath
Tell me of the burning heat
Which only burns for him
To just relinquish its hold
When the time is right
And let him have his spell
A spot to cool the world
Tell me how he felt
Once he knew he could see him
If only just this once
A single moment
Burning bright meets shadow
Eclipse
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The imperative case you used is very commanding.
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That was such a beautiful poem! I love the idea of the Sun and Moon forever yearning for those times when they should meet again. Well done!
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